tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post6232167119234819443..comments2024-03-27T02:51:33.336-07:00Comments on Finding Myself in Hoboken: Finding Old HobokenMary Loishttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01515655542270431289noreply@blogger.comBlogger11125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-26530637388922653172012-08-26T10:49:18.375-07:002012-08-26T10:49:18.375-07:00That Was Tomorrow is now available as an eBook. Th...<i>That Was Tomorrow</i> is now available as an eBook. This section was used as backstory and did not make it into the book as is, but informs the section of Amelia's childhood in early 20th century Hoboken. To learn more, see my website at http://www.findingfairhope.com or order through amazon, iBooks, Barnes & Noble, or Vook.Mary Loishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01515655542270431289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-58880411180464326062011-02-13T13:00:38.484-08:002011-02-13T13:00:38.484-08:00It seems to start off quite fast. There are some i...It seems to start off quite fast. There are some interesting references to events and locale. More descriptive detail of them, <br />and the characters,would create more vivid mental pictures. Maybe that is yet to come?<br />It seems like there could be several chapters devoted to what <br />is presented here.<br />Amelia can end up any whichway at <br />present. Thanks for the taste of<br />a new piece.Bobnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-51343773680336643362011-02-05T14:26:30.041-08:002011-02-05T14:26:30.041-08:00And you shall have dialogue, Tim! A few paragraphs...And you shall have dialogue, Tim! A few paragraphs after this, an onslaught of dialogue!Mary Loishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01515655542270431289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-37789220523940863902011-02-05T14:25:48.610-08:002011-02-05T14:25:48.610-08:00This is clear, interesting, and talented prose. It...This is clear, interesting, and talented prose. It holds up even without dialog, which I usually prefer woven into a novel. Of course, there may be dialog in future chapters.Timbucknoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-23021789942200766482011-02-05T13:44:18.719-08:002011-02-05T13:44:18.719-08:00I'm hooked!! I cannot WAIT to read more of Am...I'm hooked!! I cannot WAIT to read more of Amelia's story!!peanuthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15183570752833434312noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-7820430686595671652011-02-04T07:25:44.574-08:002011-02-04T07:25:44.574-08:00@Jerry: Spoken like a true New Jerseyite! Ha!@Jerry: Spoken like a true New Jerseyite! Ha!Mary Loishttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01515655542270431289noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-84592050932617009442011-02-04T07:21:39.727-08:002011-02-04T07:21:39.727-08:00Wonderfully evocative view of old time Hoboken. So...Wonderfully evocative view of old time Hoboken. Sounds like you are off to a solid start. Plot suggestion: Dolly Sinatra would be about the same age as Amelia. Maybe you can work her in. Just kidding.Jerry Andersenhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15525322683923441073noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-16579302730200399602011-02-04T02:18:44.988-08:002011-02-04T02:18:44.988-08:00...and? Keep going, keep going!...and? Keep going, keep going!Stevehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13344019865877813386noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-38554119210098832412011-02-03T18:37:35.398-08:002011-02-03T18:37:35.398-08:00Once again, Mary Lois Adshead sweeps the reader in...Once again, Mary Lois Adshead sweeps the reader into another time and place on a magic carpet of descriptive eloquence.Jon Odellnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-13755193040414411342011-02-03T16:54:24.449-08:002011-02-03T16:54:24.449-08:00Good stuff.Good stuff.Quinnnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-2680602048847357735.post-48765986105467404762011-02-03T16:00:11.432-08:002011-02-03T16:00:11.432-08:00Really looking forward to the rest of the book. I&...Really looking forward to the rest of the book. I'm really loving it so far.Cheryl A.https://www.blogger.com/profile/02829752432996436803noreply@blogger.com